Motivation Through Writing
Myrtis (Doucey) Mixon, Ed. D.
University of San Francisco
How can we motivate our students to be excited about their classes? One way is to tell them stories. Another way is to ask them to write stories.
Stories educate, enrich, and entertain everyone. Find easy stories in English. But for now, I will whet your appetite by sending you two of the stories that will be published in the forthcoming book of stories called “Untold Tales” written by English ACCESS Microscholarship Students in Nepal, These are the stories that they wrote at the winter camp in 2013 in Pokhara.
These anecdotes and tales of exprience provide an enjoyable opportunity to increase vocabulary, reading comprehension, listening and speaking and, ultimately, writing. The stories and exercises together are a whole-language anthology designed to improve communication skills. These stories include exercises that employ the cooperative/collaborative learning philosophy and address multiple learning styles.
Using stories is a magical way to teach, effective at any age. Here’s a summary of how stories aid language-learning:
- provide motivation for reading
- heighten listening skills
- develop speaking skills
- use cooperative learning strategies
- foster creative language growth
- provide content-based material
- Serve as model for further writing
All learners, from babies to grandmothers, learn better with stories; they are energizers. Integrating stories as an adjunct to the teacher’s repertoire in the classroom setting is not only simple, but makes perfect sense. We hope you use these stories to open new worlds of content and learning possibilities. We also hope they serve as a springboard to motivating your own students to write stories.
Enjoy the stories. If you want some more, write to me at “email@example.com” and I will send you more. These two are from Kathmandu and Gorkha, but I have many others, some from Butwal and Birgunj.
One early morning, on my way to temple, I saw sparkling eyes in ragged clothes. I saw their creative hands and bright smiles. These children are strangers to me but no different from our own children whom we always love and support.
Two days later, I visited the prison of Sundhara, Kathmandu, for my class in social work. I saw many such faces who reside in prisons alongside their incarcerated parents and I became sad. These children have done nothing wrong. They are simply caught up in something they don’t understand.
I couldn’t forget them so a few months later, along with some friends, we opened up a child daycare centre in a rented house. My parents were not happy and they told me to leave it. However, I was determined to take those children out of prison and look after them and educate them for the future.
When I started this, I was 21, and nobody believed in me. People thought I was crazy. They laughed at me.
After two years, in 2005, I established The Butterfly Home for the children. Then, I travelled to many other places, speaking with jailers, parents and authorities, preparing to bring children out of prison. My own parents now understood and helped me. We were so touched by the children’s plight, that they are forced to live with their impoverished, incarcerated parents because there is no one to look after them on the outside.
It has been eight years since I began gathering the children from Nepali prisons and bringing them to live in a centre in the capital, Kathmandu, providing them not only with food and shelter, but also education and motherly love. I am happy to be recognized as their mamu. Now I have become the second Nepali woman to win the 2012 CNN Hero Award at the star-studded award ceremony held in Los Angeles. But still 80 children are living in prison and I am going to take them out of the prison soon.
My name is Puspa Basnet and children are my hope. I believe the world is their place where they can carve their future with their own hands.
Prashanna Mahat, 15
Understanding the Story
How did Puspa Basnet get involved with helping the children?
sparkling reside incarcerated determined plight impoverished carved
1. The stars were ______________________________________________ in the sky.
2. The children’s parents are __________________________________ in the prisons.
3. The children have nowhere to ____________________________ out of the prisons.
4. Puspa Basnet was _______________________ to get the children out of the prisons.
5. Many people were affected by the ______________________ of these poor children.
6. To make something out of something can be to ____________________________ it.
7. The parents in the prison have no money; they are __________________________ .
Now you Talk
1. What would it be like to be one of those children living in the prison?
2. Where do they go to school?
3. Is there a way you could help these children?
Now you Create
1. Write a letter to the mayor of your town asking for help.
2. Draw a cartoon strip about this problem.
1. Mother in prison, her son: talking about his going to school.
2. That son, another student: talking about where he lives.
3. Two Girls who live with parents in prison: talking about their lives.
4. Two guards in prison: planning to help the children
5. Puspa Basnet, mayor of town: talking about helping more children.
This is a true story that happened in Dada Gaun village near Laxmi bazaar in 2012.
One Saturday, Rina and Rehan, a brother and sister asked their parents if they could go to the park. Their parents said, “Please, go safely. There are so many bad people in the road.”
Rina said, “Don’t worry. We will be careful.” They crossed one town where many busses went here and there. They went to the park. While they were walking on the road, a micro bus stopped just beside them. The door opened and a man jumped out, grabbed them both and put them in the micro bus.
They were taken to the jungle which is near the park. They were so afraid and they cried a lot. Many hours went by. The kidnapper went near Rina and laughed. Rina asked, “Why are you laughing?”
The kidnapper said, “You are my one corore rupees. That is the ransom we will get from your parents. Give me your phone number. But Rina didn’t give it to him. He slapped her and said, “If you don’t give me your father’s phone number, I will kill you right now.”
Rina was afraid of him and gave the number. Meanwhile, the children’s parents were worried when they didn’t come home by evening time. Then their mobile phone rang. The kidnapper demanded one corore rupees as a ransom. The kidnapper said to him, “If you don’t give me the ransom money, you will see your children’s dead bodies.”
Hearing this, the father became more afraid. Then the father thought of a trick. “Where are you?” asked Rina’s father. The kidnapper said, “I am in the jungle near the park.”
While the father kept talking to the kidnapper, the mother called the police station and said, “Please save my children. They have been kidnapped. They are in the jungle near the park. The kidnapper demands one corore rupees as ransom. I don’t have even thousands.”
The police hurried and drove very quickly. They stopped the car in the park and walked into the jungle. They surrounded the microbus and caught the kidnapper. The children were saved.
Their parents gave many thanks to the police. They told the police not to let the kidnapper free because if he is free he would kidnap other children. After that he was put into the jail for his whole life.
Kasam Ale, 15
Understanding the Story
What is a moral for this story?
Fill in the blanks of the summary with the words below.
ransom surrounded kidnappers tricked
microbus worried careful grabbed
The children wanted to go to the park. Their parents were __________________ They said, “Be very _________________ . While the children were walking, a _________________ stopped and a man jumped out and _______________________ them. The men were __________________________. They demanded a _____________________ . The father ________________ the bad men. The police ____________ the kidnappers.
Now You Talk
1. What would you do if a kidnapper grabbed you?
2. How can you solve a crime with a mobile phone?
Now You Create
1. Draw a picture of the kidnappers.
2. Write another ending to this story.
1. Mother, girl: warning about bad people.
2. Girl, kidnapper: he asks for her phone number.
3. Sister, brother: planning how to get away from kidnappers
4. Father, police: planning to catch kidnappers.
5. Mother, girl: talking about their capture.